crazydiamondsue ([info]herald_reader) wrote,
@ 2006-04-05 21:42:00
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FICLET: ...There's Fire
Title: ...There's Fire
Author: [info]crazydiamondsue
Pairing: Spike/Angel
Rating: PG-13-ish
Notes: Late AtS Season 5, post-coital banter, 1000 words of smoking kink.
Other stuff: Thanks to [info]stoney321 for the read-through; written for [info]entrenous88 for her BIRTHDAY! She asked long ago for Spike/Angel and smoking, it's since sat on my harddrive in various incarnations.


“Been a while since I’ve seen you do that,” Spike said as his fingers left his lips, sending streams of smoke to twist and spin, blending in the air with Angel’s. He dipped his head, his lips curling slightly. “Sure the soul’s okay with it?”

Angel closed his eyes, his nostrils flaring as he inhaled deeply again. “Been a while since I have.” The smoke hit the back of his throat and he shuddered lightly. He rubbed his thumb against the filter tip and imagined it falling, sparking, a line of fire as it raced across a concrete floor. Flames licking up slim, white legs that glowed ghostly pale in its path, eager to burn. “Flesh on fire - lit up the sky,” he murmured, his head tilting back, eyes opening and staring up into smoke-filled dimness.

Spike’s eyes narrowed in confusion and he shifted restlessly, his legs tangled in the sheets. “Well, you just get darker and darker, don’t you?”

“What’s the matter, Spike?” Angel chuckled, rolling over, the cigarette lax between the fingers that trailed down Spike’s bare chest. He turned his head away as ash skittered across Spike’s flesh, glancing instead to the floor, where below them Wesley and Gunn paced, their weapons in hand, more imagined than heard. “Sent you to sooth the savage beast, didn’t they?”

“I’m not your bloody geisha,” Spike snorted. He huffed at the ashes and sparks scattering across his chest and then watched with not a little satisfaction as an ember melted a perfectly round hole through the silk sheets pooling below Angel’s hips.

“I didn’t say you were,” Angel answered. “But then, you were the one with the thing for Asia.” His thumbnail scraped against Spike’s nipple as he brought the cigarette to his mouth again. Smoke curled from his lips to Spike’s as he leaned closer. “I would have said tavern wench.”

Spike’s tongue darted out, just tasting the smoky richness of Angel’s mouth, and then he turned away. Ruining the moment, or making it, whatever Angel needed this to be. “Shut up and smoke,” he sighed, ignoring the choice of meanings behind Angel’s half-smile. “Christ, give you the one thing you’re allowed to brood while doing and you decide to get chatty.”

Angel grunted softly and fell back against the bare mattress, the sheets, pillows - all the gilded cage comforts Spike had both mocked and envied - scattered and torn by eager hands. Hands far steadier, calmer now, lifting to two sets of lips as they smoked silently for a moment. Eyes focused away from each other, falling instead to the sheets that crumpled around their hips, the torn window blinds that gave glimpse of the darkening night sky, the discarded clothes that piled together on the floor, connecting all the dots to Angel’s bed.

“Haven’t seen you do this in a while, either, Spike,” Angel said quietly.

Spike’s gaze rose from tracing the shadows, the canyons, the bloody mountains' majesties Angel’s hips were creating in the drape of the sheet. His lips quirked, tongue faster than thought as he prepared to illustrate all the times and ways he’d done this very thing, without Angel’s participation or permission, and then the words died away as he found Angel’s gaze back on the cigarette in his hand.

Spike exhaled harshly, pinching the burned down tip and then flinging the ashed-out butt onto a bedside table. “Well, you try burnin’ up from the inside and see how bloody eager you are to hold a flame to your face.”

“Doesn’t really make sense for us, does it?” Angel asked, considering the dimming tip of his own cigarette.

“Unlike this Black Thorn plan of yours, which is the Acathla 2004 of great ideas,” Spike nodded. He darted away as Angel sat up, cigarette poised to make Spike his vampire ashtray again. “It’s just smoking, mate,” Spike said quickly. “We’re vampires, yeah? That which does not kill us…” he reached for his lighter, the flame flaring at his lips as he lit another smoke, “…makes us look hotter.”

Angel snorted in response and a priceless piece of imported object d’Wolfram and Hart became an actual ashtray as he ground ashes into it. “Always did like to feel the burn, huh, Spike?” He plucked the lighter out of Spike’s hands, turning it over in his and feeling its aged smoothness, the pattern long since worn. “Cities in flame. Rooms in candlelight.” His thumb worked over a groove in the lighter’s base. “Slayers in arms. Can’t stay away from it.”

Spike looked at him steadily over the smoke leaving his lips. “Drawn to it, aren’t we? To the flame. Like a couple of bloody moths.” Chuckling, he grinned down at Angel. “Just a couple of fireflies…or fairies…” he coughed. “Or dragons, maybe.” He shrugged. “Somethin’ with wings.”

Angel settled back into the bed again, bare body just brushing Spike’s. “That’s your death wish, Icarus,” Angel said, his eyes narrowing, heavy with sleep in the smoky haze. “I was always kind of into tempting fate with cathedrals and crucifixes, myself.”

They were quiet for a moment; the soundlessness of breathless smoking, as illogical, as unimaginable, as Spike’s seeming serenity as he waited for Angel to lose this calm. Waited for the smoke settling to become unsettling, and whatever soothing he’d done to be driven away by thoughts of the mission. The past. Or Angel’s grim visions of their future, fueled in flames.

“I always kind of regretted that, though,” Angel said suddenly, his head restless against Spike’s shoulder.

“You? With regrets? Shudder to think,” Spike muttered.

“That vampires couldn’t fly,” Angel said as if Spike hadn’t spoken. “You know, the hard-to-kill thing hasn’t turned out too bad, and never having to worry about losing my hair…” Angel shrugged. “Flying, though…” he sighed quietly. “Would have been a big perk.”

Spike glanced over to where two dusters billowed over a chair, sleeves and tails entwined in a gloriously obscene embrace of leather. “Well, at least we've got the coats.”

Angel’s hand curled around Spike’s, drawing the cigarette to his lips and teasing Spike’s palm with his tongue. “Yeah. There’s that.”

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[info]lynnenne
2006-04-06 03:07 am UTC (link)
Oh, I love this. It has great sexual tension, despite the fact that the sex is over by the time you start the fic. The way they touch each other, watch each other, share intimacy without speaking the words--not to mention all that naked skin. ;)

He rubbed his thumb against the filter tip and imagined it falling, sparking, a line of fire as it raced across a concrete floor. Flames licking up slim, white legs that glowed ghostly pale in its path, eager to burn.

Perfect memory. You work their past into their present seamlessly.

“Unlike this Black Thorn plan of yours, which is the Acathla 2004 of great ideas.”

HEEEE!

His thumb worked over a groove in the lighter’s base. “Slayers in arms."

I love the juxtaposition of Buffy with Spike's lighter. The two will be forever entwined in my thoughts. *g*

Great work, Sue. *hugs you*





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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 03:32 am UTC (link)
“Unlike this Black Thorn plan of yours, which is the Acathla 2004 of great ideas.” That, uh, may have made me snort out loud myself.

Ah, that lighter. I'm glad you liked that - I really enjoy stories that have her as a constant presence between them and I wanted a bit of that here. Thanks so much - these few words were hard to write (freakishly hard) so hearing from you makes oh, my week. *hugs hard*

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[info]tesla321
2006-04-06 03:14 am UTC (link)
Very nice and very hot! I actually think at times that less explicit, more implied = imagination overdrive.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 03:33 am UTC (link)
Yay! I love UST and afterglow, so it was fun to write that here. I especially like it with this pairing, because I love the way they'd feel before and after almost more than the actual doing. Thank you!

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[info]tkp
2006-04-06 03:46 am UTC (link)
Dude. Duuuuuuuuuuude. I loved this so, so much.

It was so very after-sex, kinda reminiscent of being high (*whistles innocently*), when everythings all weirdly relaxed and introspective, but there's this...underlying feeling that it's not going to last. Which is why I love this line so much:

Waited for the smoke settling to become unsettling, and whatever soothing he’d done to be driven away by thoughts of the mission.

(but I also love it for the kinda slant play on the word settling.)

I just love it all, from the abstract kinda wandering conversation, to all the little minute details you so excel at describing. You make me a happy fic reader.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 01:58 pm UTC (link)
*joins you in an innocent whistle*

I'm so glad you liked this! I had most of it written (and dude - the original first paragraph was as purpley prose as I've ever written - I always think I'm not "writing" if I'm not making 10 allusions per paragraph, but Stoney fixed that up by suggesting I drop the first and start with the dialogue. She was right.)

So happy you liked the settling/unsettling, too, I dashed that out and almost changed it, and then thought, nah, I've already got about 3 bits of alliteration, what's one play on words going to do? Thanks so much - you've calmed my savage writing beast.

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[info]lillianmorgan
2006-04-06 04:12 am UTC (link)
::happy sigh::
That had such the feel of coming down after good sex ;) The way that feeling wafts around them, just like the cigarette smoke. And Spike is like the cigarette - a habit that Angel can't break. I love how they banter with each other - it's all in-jokes and double entredres and witty allusions to long forgotten moments.
“I would have said tavern wench.”
He so would have too. :)
That which does not kill us…” he reached for his lighter, the flame flaring at his lips as he lit another smoke, “…makes us look hotter.”
How true is that?
In a word: yumness!

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 01:59 pm UTC (link)
And Spike is like the cigarette - a habit that Angel can't break. Ooo, that's good! Wish I'd thought of it. :)

I had to have the tavern wench bit. I love Angel remembering his past in any way, and that was a fun way for me. Thank you so much for the kind words - I've been unsure about everything I've written lately, so it's much appreciated.

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[info]yourlibrarian
2006-04-06 04:59 am UTC (link)
“Christ, give you the one thing you’re allowed to brood while doing and you decide to get chatty.”

Heh, that's just encroachment that is.

“Unlike this Black Thorn plan of yours, which is the Acathla 2004 of great ideas,” Spike nodded.
LOL!

Spike glanced over to where two dusters billowed over a chair, sleeves and tails entwined in a gloriously obscene embrace of leather.
Nice picture that! And the rest of it.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:08 pm UTC (link)
I had everything under the sun for the Black Thorn - worst idea since the Norman Invasion, worst idea since gaucho pants (okay, I didn't have that, but it was a bad idea) and then Acathla popped into my head. Glad that worked!

Oh, those coats! Vamps and Slayers in leather...it created a fandom for me, really. Thank you!

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[info]katekat1010
2006-04-06 05:16 am UTC (link)
i always knew they fetishized those coats too much!! and yet, they look so sexy in them.

this was lovely. and makes me want to smoke. mmmmm.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:09 pm UTC (link)
i always knew they fetishized those coats too much!! Hee! Yes. I always loved Angel and Spike in theirs (although Angel worked some nice linen numbers, too) but Buffy and/or Xander in full-length leather in southern California in May...yeah. Okay. :) Thanks - glad you liked. (And smoking's bad, m'kay? *hides cigarette behind back*)

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[info]peasant_
2006-04-06 05:56 am UTC (link)
This is lovely, perfect little moment capture.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:10 pm UTC (link)
Thank you - I always liked the little moments with these two. Glad you liked.

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[info]ex_dovil323
2006-04-06 09:19 am UTC (link)
I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU!

This is wonderful and I adore it to pieces, and so many fantastic lines packed in such a short space.

Tavern wenches, hotness, coats, flying and this...

“Well, you try burnin’ up from the inside and see how bloody eager you are to hold a flame to your face.”

Hee! And it's even a plausable reason for him to have stopped!

Fantastic voices, characterisation, imagery..did I mention the pure unadulterated love?

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:14 pm UTC (link)
I've always fixated a bit on Spike's thanks-for-not-smoking in Season 5. I know it was a James thing (and good on him!) but no one does the sexy smoking like him (unless it's Angel in "Redefinition" - honorable mention to "Innocence" but c'mon, that one's got showtune refereces!) I think this may be the third fic in which I've mentioned Spike not smoking?

So I wrote S/A for my Xander friend's birthday, and I'm writing S/X for you. I'm switching OTPs on you! Oooo!

Thanks, darlin' - you make me way happy.

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[info]amy_star_
2006-04-06 09:22 am UTC (link)
I really really liked this. Haven't read good Spangel recently, and this really hit the spot.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:17 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much! I love S/A, and finding characterization, insight and great UST/intimacy with the two is always an exciting find. I'm glad this wee bit of smoking kink worked for you. Thanks!

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[info]lostakasha
2006-04-06 11:14 am UTC (link)
It thrilled me to see that you'd written this, Sue! Your Angel voice is so right -- all that weariness and that little slice of wistfulness. And just for the record? Acathla 2004 -- perfect! Loved this so much. Have a big happy right now. Very, very big.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:19 pm UTC (link)
That you said my Angel voice is good is like gold. Not kidding. I'd write Buffy/Angel, Spike/Angel, Xander/Angel, Cordy/Angel till the vampire cows came home if I felt at all comfortable in Angel voice. The thought of "You're making him sound like Xander!" is always in the back of my mind. He's the only character I'm afraid to write. To me, so much of Angel's voice wasn't in the words on the page, but the way DB said them, so it's hard for me to capture it. That you think I did makes my millenium. And Acathla references are fun. :) Thank you!

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[info]violethamster
2006-04-06 12:36 pm UTC (link)
I don't just love this fic, I'm in love with it. It's gonna get creeped out by me rereading it and take out a restraining order.

Just...gorgeous *happy sigh*. Great turns of phrase, perfect banter, wonderful mix of emotions.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:21 pm UTC (link)
*Spreads fic out on floor in come-hither pose, invites you to stalk*

Thank you so much, my little hamster! You had a big part in creating my S/A love, so that makes me all kinds of happy. As does your icon.

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[info]brandil
2006-04-06 01:04 pm UTC (link)
Lovely, lovely, lovely.

Great voices.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:22 pm UTC (link)
Thank you and thank you! I forgot how much I like writing Spike snark. Better than chocolate cigarettes, it is.

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[info]yin_again
2006-04-06 01:30 pm UTC (link)
which is the Acathla 2004 of great ideas

*sporfle*

This was nice, sweetie - good blend of sharp and sad.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:23 pm UTC (link)
Heee. I make Acathla jokes! I'm so easily pleased. I also had "soothing" in quotes like that and changed it to ital. *coughs* I have no idea why. Thanks babe!

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[info]a2zmom
2006-04-06 01:50 pm UTC (link)
Absolutely lovely, the quiet sharing and introspection before the inevitable storm.

“Unlike this Black Thorn plan of yours, which is the Acathla 2004 of great ideas,”

Never thought of it like that, but I will from now on.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:24 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I had several things I tried out with the Spike's estimation of the Black Thorn plan, but his Acathla "What part of Happy Meals on legs are you not getting" disdain worked best. Glad you liked!

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[info]amavel_bel
2006-04-06 02:27 pm UTC (link)
Great fic and so beautifully written. I could imagine every pos-coital moment of them in bed *g*. Thanks for sharing :))))))).

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 02:52 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much. Oh, the lovely imaginings of Angel and Spike in mussed sheets. One of my many small joys. :)

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[info]arabella_hope
2006-04-06 03:01 pm UTC (link)
Followed a pimp from [info]uberaeryn - This was lovely, I adore your description, very sensuous. And the banter just flowed perfectly.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 06:23 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it, and god bless [info]uberaeryn. I'm happy the sensuality came through; I really wanted it to have that "just shagged" feeling. Thank you!

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[info]beadattitude
2006-04-06 03:24 pm UTC (link)
So. incredibly. delicious.

Mmmm. Loved the tension, the history, the ghosts and smoke between them....lovely

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 06:24 pm UTC (link)
I love S/A for the history. Oh, yeah. So much stuff there to play with, even in a short piece. Thank you!

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[info]tabaqui
2006-04-06 03:58 pm UTC (link)
Ahhhhh. Now that is very, very neat.
I like this slow aftertalk. 'Icarus' and moths and Slayers and fire...
Pretty and a little melencholy and just right.
:)

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 06:25 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Thanks, baby. I pondered Icarus, but it sounded Jossian. If I might say so.

I just printed out "Oxnard" (see my last post) and I'm devouring it now. Loving it!

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[info]rainkatt
2006-04-06 04:05 pm UTC (link)
So much love. Great voices, lovely undercurrents.

Joining in the love for the Acathla joke. Good thing I had no tea in my mouth at the time.

And the lighter! Hints of Buffy! Yes.

Loved this line:

“Well, you try burnin’ up from the inside and see how bloody eager you are to hold a flame to your face.”

Indeed.

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 06:38 pm UTC (link)
Hee! I figured Acathla worked when it made my husband laugh (reading slash and getting more than a "doesn't suck" grunt from him is good) and the Angel/Buffy/Spike dichotomy will always suck me in. Thank you!

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[info]moosesal
2006-04-06 04:48 pm UTC (link)
I love this. I think my favorite part, is that they don't have sex in the story. They've already done it. I like this whole, what happens after you've got going on here. Some wonderfully funny moments, some nice references, and just the right amount of tension for these two. Nice job.

Love the Acathla reference. *g*

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 06:40 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I have a big kink for post-sexage smoking, even if 70s TV overdid it a bit. And Angel smoking was always incredibly hot for me. And if Joss had gone ahead with his idea to have Giles and Robin share a joint in "Chosen" I would have been incredibly happy. Perhaps not socially responsible, but still thought "Hot!" Thanks, sweetie.

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[info]anelith
2006-04-06 05:56 pm UTC (link)
Sue, this is fabulous... This scene feels so perfectly right between them; the sense of lazy satisfaction after sex yet still with a bit of that tension that one thinks must always exist between Spike and Angel. As in:

then watched with not a little satisfaction as an ember melted a perfectly round hole through the silk sheets

Yep, that's always going to be Spike with Angel.

I was reminded of the scene with Buffy and Faith, where Faith says to Buffy, "At least we're hot chicks with superpowers." Only they don't get to fly either.

I adored this!

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Have you noticed my plethora of smoking vampire icons?
[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 06:43 pm UTC (link)
At least we're hot chicks with superpowers. So very much what I was going for! I loved that scene with Buffy & Faith, and I always loved scenes with Spike and Angel with Spike hitting the "being vampires is cool" but then I also loved the scenes (such as "Damage" and "Destiny") where he acknowledged that it wasn't.

And any time Angel was a bit goofy/wistful it made me smile. And think of his "how did the Flying Nun fly?" line. I like the little moments. Thank you - I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I'd forgotten how much fun getting feedback writing was!

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[info]amybnnyc
2006-04-06 07:38 pm UTC (link)
“Well, you try burnin’ up from the inside and see how bloody eager you are to hold a flame to your face.”
Hee! I actually hadn't really thought about the whole suddenly-not-smoking!Spike of season 5, but... yeah. This is a perfect explanation of it, though.

the Acathla 2004 of great ideas
That may be the awesomest thing ever. I'm fairly certain that it is.

“That’s your death wish, Icarus,” Angel said, his eyes narrowing, heavy with sleep in the smoky haze. “I was always kind of into tempting fate with cathedrals and crucifixes, myself.”
I love the way that you paralleled those two fascinations with destruction here, and I love the sort of understated fondness and brotherly teasing combined with a sort of undercurrent of sated heat that's here in these lines. Really, really gorgeous.

Spike glanced over to where two dusters billowed over a chair, sleeves and tails entwined in a gloriously obscene embrace of leather.
I love that image, and the combination of domestic and serene and erotic with which that description imbues the coats.

This was really wonderful; I love the whole air of languor and that surreal sort of post- but still perhaps pre-coital heat that suffuses everything here, because it makes the heavier insights hit just that much harder. I enjoyed this so much!

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-06 09:38 pm UTC (link)
That was some beautifully written feedback! That could almost be fic. :) Thank you so much - I'm actually kind of flummoxed on how to respond, especially since I was afraid I'd dashed off the end of the fic and dithered between snark and sadness.

I'm just amazed that the Acathla thing worked - that was really just the best I could come up with at the time.

paralleled those two fascinations with destruction - *claps hands* Yay! I wasn't sure if I'd pulled that off. I was really going for economy of both dialogue and description and I wasn't sure if I'd gotten the point across.

Truly, your feedback outstrips the story in brilliance. Thank you so much.

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[info]cordelianne
2006-04-06 10:09 pm UTC (link)
This is wonderful!! I LOVE it!!

I adore that it's set post-sex, and you can feel the afterglow as they smoke and chat. It's one of few situations when they'd both be relaxed enough to have this kind of moment.

Spike’s eyes narrowed in confusion and he shifted restlessly, his legs tangled in the sheets. “Well, you just get darker and darker, don’t you?” This is such the perfect Spike reaction to Angel's comment, and I love the image of Spike's legs tangled.

I can totally picture Spike and Angel having the geisha/tavern wench discussion. And Spike's explanation for not smoking is excellent and makes so much sense!

“Unlike this Black Thorn plan of yours, which is the Acathla 2004 of great ideas,” heeeee! I join everyone else in proclaiming this an awesome line!!

“It’s just smoking, mate,” Spike said quickly. “We’re vampires, yeah? That which does not kill us…” he reached for his lighter, the flame flaring at his lips as he lit another smoke, “…makes us look hotter.”
This is fabulous and very Spike. I love how the description links to the talk of burning up and fires, and is something I can totally picture.

I like how Buffy is referenced. As well the Icarus reference is great and nicely links to the discussion of vampires not being able to fly (which I loved).

The last two paragraphs are particularly wonderful with the image of the coats in a gloriously obscene embrace of leather, and the sexiness of Angel smoking Spike's cigarette.

Fabulous job, sweetie!! :)

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[info]herald_reader
2006-04-06 10:47 pm UTC (link)
Oh, the feedback's all so much better than the story! Thank you so much. I had little things I wanted - Spike's reason for not smoking after his return, Angel smoking from Spike's cigarette and the geisha/tavern wench banter - and the rest just kind of blurted. It was nice to blurt. I haven't in so long.

The leather kink and smoking kink are my own, so I'm glad that seems to have translated, and you know, mocking Angelus' Acathla plan was fun.

Thank you for your wonderful words - they are much appreciated.

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[info]silvercobwebs
2006-04-06 10:22 pm UTC (link)
Here via [info]su_herald and I had to add to the praise pile, because this was such a pleasure to read. Strong character voices, great imagery (the whole smoking/fire/burning theme is so very appropriate in so many ways). Thank you for posting this, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you, if you have the time and inclination : D

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[info]herald_reader
2006-04-06 10:49 pm UTC (link)
The [Bad username: su_herald"] rocks. *g* Thanks so much - I'm glad you enjoyed! I loved playing with all the smoke/fire things, and I was hoping not to overdo any of them. I don't write very often anymore, and I really haven't written much S/A, but everything I have is here in my memories, pairings designated. Thank you again!

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[info]spikendru
2006-04-07 12:25 am UTC (link)
Day-um, girl! You should take hiatuses? hiatusii? more often if this is what you come up with on your return! You absolutely blew me away with this. Loved Angel's referencing setting Darla and Dru on fire the last time he smoked, and Spike's not quite getting it. Acathla 2004! Bwahaha!

Angel's “Always did like to feel the burn, huh, Spike?” He plucked the lighter out of Spike’s hands, turning it over in his and feeling its aged smoothness, the pattern long since worn. “Cities in flame. Rooms in candlelight.” His thumb worked over a groove in the lighter’s base. “Slayers in arms. Can’t stay away from it.” gave me chills, and then the absolutely perfect juxtaposition of Spike's humor: “Drawn to it, aren’t we? To the flame. Like a couple of bloody moths.” Chuckling, he grinned down at Angel. “Just a couple of fireflies…or fairies…” he coughed. “Or dragons, maybe.” He shrugged. “Somethin’ with wings.” Brava, Sue!

Angel's wanting to fly was lovely, and never having to worry about losing his hair! Snerk!

This was excellent - thank you for writing this.

*snuggles you*

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[info]crazydiamondsue
2006-04-07 01:05 am UTC (link)
The best part about finally writing something again has been the awesome feedback. Oh, not just hearing if people like it (who doesn't like to hear that?) but that they got where I was going and the stuff I pondered, "Lame? Not lame? Slight lameness?" worked out okay. Whether it was good, iffy, bad or just shameless Sue-kink, I'm glad I posted it and that it's not still just sitting in my fic folder with about 5 other stories that I click open, re-read and skitter away from.

Thanks, sweetie. I love that you love the Dru & Darla part, because that one gave me shivers. *g*

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